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Band 4+: There will be a traditional celebration in your country and you want to invite your friend from an English-speaking country. Write him/her a letter and - invite your friend, - explain what happens at the party, - describe the tradition and why it's important in your country, - say why it is important for your friend to be there.

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Dear Vin,

There is an Diwali festival in my country, where it is celebrated in a traditional way, I am inviting you to the celebration in which we enjoy in a traditional way, I know you always wished to attend this types of celebration.

Diwali is an Hindu festival which is celebrated in the returning of lord Ram form long 14 years promise to stay in the dense forest and also came after defeating Ravan. This is celebrated with all family members in a traditional gathering. All the member wear traditional clothes and worship gods, after completing the pooja we all start to fire the crackers which is having a lot of fun. This festival is also called as festival of light.

You always being looking for this type of traditional celebration and you will definitely enjoy a lot, and this will be became your best memory in life and you will come again.

Hope to see you soon with us Vin, we will enjoy a lot together.

Your beloved Friend,

Mahir.

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4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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festival: 4

celebrated: 3

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enjoy: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter addresses all parts of the task, but some aspects could be more thoroughly explained and developed.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's structure is understandable, but the flow could be improved with better transitions and paragraphing. Grammatical errors affect the overall coherence.

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The vocabulary used is adequate, but a wider range of vocabulary and more precise word choices would enhance the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity and fluency. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed.

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