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Band 4+: This graph shows the average temperatures in three cities over a two-month period.

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The image depicts a line graph titled "Average temperatures – Paris, Dubai and Melbourne," tracking temperature changes from April to June; Paris starts at 10°C in April, rising to 15°C in May, and reaching 20°C in June; Dubai begins at 25°C in April, escalating to over 30°C in May, and soaring above 35°C in June; Melbourne shows an initial 15°C in April, dipping below 15°C in May, and falling to nearly 10°C in June.

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The line chart depicts the temperature variations among the Paris, Dubai and Melbourne cities throughout the month of April, May and June.

Overall, temperature of Paris and Dubai observed to be significantly increased; however melbourne city temperature slightly decreased over provided twop months data.

In April, Pasris temperature maintained at just over 20 degree celsius, which also hovered in the month of May but then a drastic escalation noted and temperature rose and reached at the peak of more than 30 degree celsius; the highest among all the cited cities.

On the other hand, Dubai city climate also turned hot in between the month of April and May; later on it plateaued as it temperature recorded around16 degree centigrade in the month of June. Meanwhile, Melbourne city temperature, which was initially at exact 15 degree centigrade, by following a linear graph pattern, dropped to 10 degree centigrade; the lowest among all cities temperature in June.

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The report identifies the main trends but contains inaccuracies in the data reported. The description of the data is not always clear and contains some language errors. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data and use more precise language.

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The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The flow of information is difficult to follow due to abrupt transitions and a lack of cohesive devices. Consider organizing the report into distinct paragraphs, each focusing on a specific aspect or trend in the data. Use transition words and phrases to connect ideas and create a smoother narrative.

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The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and contains inaccuracies. There are instances of inappropriate word choice and imprecise language. Expand your vocabulary related to describing trends and changes in data. Pay attention to the correct usage of prepositions and articles. For example, instead of 'temperature of Paris,' use 'the temperature in Paris.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors significantly impede clarity and comprehension. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors before submitting your work.

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