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Band 6+: This graph shows the average temperatures in three cities over a two-month period.

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The image depicts a line graph titled "Average temperatures – Paris, Dubai and Melbourne," tracking temperature changes from April to June; Paris starts at 10°C in April, rising to 15°C in May, and reaching 20°C in June; Dubai begins at 25°C in April, escalating to over 30°C in May, and soaring above 35°C in June; Melbourne shows an initial 15°C in April, dipping below 15°C in May, and falling to nearly 10°C in June.

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The chart illustrates the comparison of average temperatures in three different countries in a span of two months. It can clearly be seen that the temperatures of Paris was taking a pole position throughout the given period, whereas the figures for Dubai and Melbourne exhibited trends which were similar to each other.

Upon closer examination, as presented, the proportion of temperatures in Paris were indicating upward trend from April where it equaled just over 20 degrees, until May when it stood at roughly 34 degrees. By June, the level of average temperatures had spiked to just over 30 degrees and culminated towards the end of the survey.

The temperatures in Dubai and Melbourne commenced from 10 and 15 degrees, respectively. Then between April and May the temperatures of both cities displayed intersect at about 13 degrees. Ultimately, the level of temperatures in Dubai exhibited gradual rise to over 15 degrees, whilst the figures for Melbourne dipped to 10 degrees up to June.

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Task Response

The report attempts to describe the temperature trends in the three cities, but there are significant inaccuracies in the data reported. The description of the Paris temperatures is incorrect, and the comparison between Dubai and Melbourne contains inaccuracies and unclear descriptions. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from the graph and ensuring clarity in the descriptions and comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate structure with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and a concluding statement. However, the flow of information could be improved by using more effective transition words and phrases to connect ideas between sentences and paragraphs. For instance, the relationship between the overall trend and the specific data points could be clarified. Paragraphing is generally acceptable, but could be more skillfully managed to enhance the logical progression of ideas.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary, but some choices are not entirely appropriate or accurate for describing the data. For example, 'taking a pole position' is not the most suitable phrase in this context. There are also instances where more precise vocabulary could be used to describe temperature changes and comparisons. Expanding the range of vocabulary related to trends and data analysis would enhance the report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are noticeable grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. For instance, subject-verb agreement errors and awkward phrasing are present. While the overall meaning is generally clear, correcting these errors and improving sentence construction would significantly enhance the report's grammatical accuracy.

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