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Band 6+: this two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compressions where relavant.

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The image depicts two maps of an island, one before and one after the construction of tourist facilities. The first map shows an empty island with a few trees and a beach to the west. The second map illustrates significant development, including accommodations, a reception, a restaurant, a vehicle track, and footpaths. A pier has been added to the north, and a swimming area is designated on the west side of the island.

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The maps compare the same island, while first one is before and the second one is after the construction for tourism.

Overall, there has been significant additions in island. It used to have no facilities at all, being more nature-oriented. Over the period, however, it has been made visitor-friendly, and it is also clear that island has been made more accessible for visitors. The new island has become a good place for visitors

Looking first at the one before construction, we can see a huge island with a beach, which lies west of island. And also the total length of the island was approximetly 250-260 metres.

Moving on to the second map, the island has undergone major modifications. There are two accommodations. One is in the west near the beach, while other one is in the centre of the island. Between them, there is the restaurant in north, and in the centre lies reception block, which surrounded by a vehicle track. This track also goes down to the pier where people can go sailing in the south sea of the island. Additionally, tourists can swim near the beach in the west. A footpath connecting western accommodation units also leads to the beach.

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island: 10

beach: 4

there: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main features of the maps and provides a clear overview of the transformation from a natural state to a developed tourist destination. The comparison between the two maps is logical. To improve, ensure more precise use of prepositions and articles (e.g., 'the island' instead of 'island'). Additionally, while the description of the facilities is good, try to group information more effectively to highlight the relationship between the new structures, such as how the vehicle track connects the reception to the pier.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure, moving from an overview to a description of the original state and then to the developments. However, the progression is occasionally interrupted by awkward phrasing and repetitive sentence structures. To improve, use a wider variety of cohesive devices and transition signals. For example, instead of starting sentences with 'And also' or 'Moving on to', try using more sophisticated linking phrases like 'In terms of the developments' or 'Regarding the infrastructure'.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for describing the changes, using terms like 'undergone major modifications' and 'nature-oriented'. However, there is some repetition and a lack of precision in word choice (e.g., 'the one before construction', 'the new island has become a good place'). Aim to use more varied synonyms for 'island', 'visitors', and 'construction'. Additionally, ensure that articles (a, an, the) are used correctly with nouns to improve the natural flow of the text.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical inaccuracies that affect the overall quality. Issues include subject-verb agreement ('there has been significant additions'), missing articles ('west of island', 'in the centre lies reception block'), and incorrect preposition usage ('construction for tourism'). There are also issues with sentence fragments and run-on structures. To improve, focus on mastering article usage and ensuring that complex sentences are punctuated correctly. Practicing the use of passive voice (e.g., 'the island was developed') would also be beneficial for this type of task.

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