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Band 5+: Write a job application letter in formal language. Explain why you are applying for the position and why you are a good fit for it. Summarize your work experience and skills. Include your communication skills and thank you in the conclusion.

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Dear Sir/Madam

My name is Yunus emre, I would like to apply for a position at your company’s research and development department.

I am following your company and your team. I effected your company’s project therefore, I wanted to write this letter. I am a team player. I have good work skills and I am working as a professional. In other words, I would like to improve myself.

I have four years experience as a research and development engineer. I participated lots of project with my team and I manage this team. I worked for Airbus for instance, they need technical support for repair at the airport and they call company then, I figured out their problem.

As a matter of I need improve myself with new experience I interested in AI technology however, my company does not work with AI. Your company has a large domain for technology. I would like to work with AI therefore, I applied this position for your company.

I thank you for your consideration and look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely

Yunus Emre

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

company: 4

would: 3

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Task Response

6

The letter addresses the task but lacks detail and clarity in several areas. The connection between the applicant's experience and the specific job requirements is not fully established.

Coherence & Cohesion

5

The letter's structure and flow could be improved. Some sentences lack logical connections, impacting the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is adequate but could be more precise and sophisticated in places. A wider range of vocabulary would enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

Grammatical errors and inaccuracies detract from the overall clarity and professionalism of the letter. Improving grammatical accuracy is essential.

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