🔥 Today Only: Save 30% on Premium — Offer Ends Soon! - Upgrade Now!

Letter

Band 5+: write a letter about requesting a personal leave. Why do you want to take a leave When do you want to take a leave

See all user-written answers on this topic

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

Dear Elwyn,

I am writing this letter to inform about my personal leaves of 10 days from 12.02.2025 to 22.02.2025.

As we discussed earlier I am palnning to give the IELTS exam on 22.02.2025 for my visa purpose.It is very crusial for me to apear in this exam and get minimum 4.5 band for process of my Parmanent Resident file.If I receive less than 4.5 band then it will be difficult for me to get the visa.

I need at least 15 days preparation for exam moreover I need to join the classes.As I am not able to do coaching and job togather at the same time.As per our work contract I have already notified you 15 days in advance so that you have time to arrange somebody else for my shift.

I hope that you understand how this exam is important for me.

Awaiting for your positive reply.

Yours faithfully,

Nehal Shukla

Word Count: 153

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter successfully addresses all parts of the task. The reason for leave and the dates are clearly stated.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly clear, but the flow could be improved with better sentence structure and paragraphing. Some points feel a bit disjointed.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is adequate, but more precise and sophisticated language could enhance the letter's impact. Some word choices are slightly informal for a formal request.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

While the letter conveys the message, there are several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and professionalism. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial.

Other Topics:

You are interested in taking a part-time evening course in photography at a local college. Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter: explain why you are interested in the course; ask about the course content and timetable; enquire about the fees and equipment you will need.

Dear Sir or Madam, Having seen your advertisement in the local newspaper for the upcoming part-time evening photography course, I am interested in enrolling, as I have recently developed a strong passion for visual arts and purchased a DSLR camera. However, I have limited technical knowledge and would like to develop my photography skills further. […]

Band 9

Write an email to the restaurant's manager in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things: State what problems you had with the food you ordered. Complain about the service. Describe how you want the restaurant to resolve the problem to your satisfaction.

Dear manager I am writing to address the situation I encountered at your food company.on the 20 th August 2026.i was celebrating my birthday so I brought my friend for dinner.we order our meals and turned to be a dissatisfied to our expectations. Firstly your work did prepare the meals as of good standard,and secondly […]

Band 4+

You recently saw an advertisement in a local newspaper for a volunteer position at a community health fair that aligns with your interest in public health. Write a letter to the event coordinator volunteering for the role. You should include details about: the specific volunteer position you are interested in, why you are a good fit for this role, and your availability for the event day and any prior commitments.

Dear Event Coordinator, I am writing to express my interest in volunteering at the upcoming community health fair, which I saw advertised in the local newspaper. I would particularly like to volunteer as a health information assistant, helping visitors find relevant health resources and guiding them to different sections of the event. I believe I […]

Band 9

You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter • explain why you think you would be suitable for the job • say what else you could do for the family • give your reasons for wanting the job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ,

Dear, Mr. Adam and Mrs. Ariana! I saw an advertisement on social media, which I find appropriate for me. Since my childhood, I dreamed work like a teacher, so teach new generation for a lot of things. So, teach them, like how to behave themselves in public, how to focus on education, so help to […]

Band 4+

You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter • introduce yourself • say why you are interested in this sports club • ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs

Dear Mr. Andrews, I trust this letter finds you well. I am writing to request some information about the sport club at your Golden Gym, located in Toronto City. I am hopeful that the outcome of our exchange will be a positive one on both sides. To debrief you on the situation, I would like […]

Band 6+

You were supposed to pick up a colleague from the airport last week, but you completely forgot due to a scheduling conflict. Write a letter to your colleague, apologizing for missing them at the airport. You should include details about: - What caused you to forget - How you realized your mistake - What you did to remedy the situation after your mistake

Hey Patric, I hope this messenge finds you well. I am writing because of my mistake, make last week, when I was supposed to pick you up from the airport. At that night my mom called me, saying that ay uncle got into a accident, and he needs me, that’s why I abruptly got there […]

Band 4+

See All

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium