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Band 5+: write a letter to a friend who is finding a part time job to support his studies. describe the job you find, explain why this job is good for him/her and what he/she needs to do to get this job.

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Dear Sam,

Hope you are doing great, I have been trying to write you since long but this busy life is not allowing me to do it so.

I know buddy, you are bit stressed due to your finances but I have brought a solution for you. My company needs a part time security guard as the previous one left recently, this job is an afternoon shift, begins at 4 pm and ends at 12 am midnight. I believe it’s a perfect time for you to work apart from your studies.

Well, this is a easy job and you already have some experience in it. So, it would be a perfect match for you, a training will be provided to you and wage rate is good as well to assist you with your academic fees.

The procedure to apply are simple, you have to send a copy of your resume and security license to company’s website and mention my name in reference, company will call you for an interview, just give your best.

Hope this works for you! Let me know for any other help.

See you soon,

Best Wishes,

Danny

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The job description is clear, and the reasons for recommending it are explained. However, minor improvements could enhance the overall response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly clear, but the flow could be smoother. Some sentences lack a strong connection, impacting the overall coherence. Minor improvements in paragraphing and sentence structure would enhance the cohesion.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, but there's room for improvement in range and precision. More sophisticated vocabulary choices would enhance the overall lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

While the letter is understandable, there are several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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