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Band 6+: Write a letter to a friend who is looking for a part-time job to support his studies.

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Dear Yash,

I hope you and your family are well. When we met last time, you are looking for part-time job. You said that you have to pay the last semester fees. For this reason, I am writing this letter.

Yesterday, I met my old friend who name is Happy. He opened a new restaurant in last week. He need some people who have experience in food chain. You are suitable for this job for few reasons. First, you have a experience in fast-pace working environment and your background is from hotel management. Moreover, you have flexible availability.

There is one requirement for this job. You should give a exam for food safety certificate. This job location is little bit far away from your house, so you need to book a taxi or you need to ride a bike. The main benefit is that you will get good tips as well as the pay rate is 20 dollar par hours which is very good as compared to other jobs.

You should contact Happy if you are interested. His contact number is 12345.

Your lovingly,

Divyakumar Patel

Word Count: 186

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Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter effectively addresses the task by providing relevant information about a potential part-time job opportunity. It includes details about the job, the employer, and the benefits.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized, but there are some minor issues with sentence structure and flow that make it slightly difficult to follow at times.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The letter uses a good range of vocabulary, but there are a few instances of inaccurate or inappropriate word choices.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, articles, and prepositions. These errors affect the overall clarity and fluency of the letter.

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