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Band 6+: Write a letter to a friend who is looking for a part-time job to support his studies.

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Dear Oleg,

I’m happy to get a letter from you. Congratulations on getting into the university.

I remember that you need a part-time job to support your studies. And I’ve found one good position.

I’ll tell you a bit about this job. There is a french cafe close to your university campus. They need a new waiter to work three days a week. You’ll have to take orders and bring meals to customers.

I believe it’s a good work position, because you could work after your lesson

They promise to pay 20 dollars per hour plus tips. I think that it allows you to have some money for your studies.

You will have to call their HR manager if you decide to start working in this cafe. Also, you need to have special clothes as uniform. The black trousers and red shirts are recommended in this place.

I hope see you soon,

Yours lovingly

Slava.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by offering a specific job opportunity. However, it could benefit from a more comprehensive and persuasive presentation of the job details and a stronger closing.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is generally clear, but the flow could be improved with smoother transitions and better paragraphing. Some sentences lack logical connection.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary is appropriate for the context, but a wider range of vocabulary and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's sophistication.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

While the letter is understandable, there are several grammatical errors and inaccuracies that affect the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial.

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