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Band 5+: Write a letter to a restaurant manager to organise a party Why you want to give the party What is special arrangements you will need. Anynrelevant question.

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Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Jay, I often visit to your restaurant, India Paradise, Windsor branch one and your restaurant have very good reputation even I personally tested your dishes and all of them are delicious. I am writing this letter to book your banquet hall of restaurant on the 30th July,2026.

Actually, I want to book this hall for my engagement party and I want to invite all my office colleges, friends, and relatives for attending my party. There are approximately hundred people, who are going to attend my party.

Additionally, I need you to arrange three to four wheelchairs for elders, due to their age there are not able to sand on their feet. I also, need you to decorate the hall accord to you and if it possible can you please arrange the stage for ring ceremony.

Furthermore, in food all the gest are vegetarian and do not like spice food so, make the food moderate spice level in all the quiches I will text you the menu on your restaurant number which I would like you to arrange.

Looking forward for your response, and can you please provide me the approximate cost for these arrangements?

your faithfully,

Jay

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

The letter addresses all three bullet points of the task. The purpose of the letter is clear, the reason for the party is explained, and both special arrangements and questions are included. However, some parts of the response could be more fully developed to reach a higher band. For example, the 'relevant questions' section is somewhat limited to just the cost; adding questions about menu availability, parking, or booking deposits would provide more depth. Additionally, while the requirements are met, there are several grammatical and mechanical errors (e.g., 'office colleges' instead of 'colleagues', 'sand on their feet' instead of 'stand', and punctuation errors) that, while they do not prevent understanding, affect the overall professional tone required for a formal letter to a manager. To improve, focus on precise vocabulary and ensuring that each bullet point is expanded with sufficient detail.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter follows a logical progression by addressing each bullet point in the task. However, the cohesion is weakened by the use of run-on sentences and improper punctuation. For example, the first paragraph contains several independent ideas joined only by commas, which makes it difficult to follow. To improve, use full stops to separate distinct thoughts and employ a wider variety of linking words (e.g., 'Furthermore', 'In addition', 'Regarding the menu') to create smoother transitions between sentences.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is sufficient to convey the basic meaning, but there are several errors in word choice and spelling that affect the professional tone required for a letter to a manager. For instance, 'office colleges' should be 'office colleagues', 'gest' should be 'guests', and 'quiches' appears to be a misuse of the word (perhaps intended to mean 'dishes'). Aim to use more precise and formal vocabulary, such as 'renowned reputation' instead of 'very good reputation' and 'accommodate' instead of 'arrange'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are frequent grammatical errors throughout the text. Issues include subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'your restaurant have' instead of 'has'), incorrect preposition usage (e.g., 'visit to your restaurant'), and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'not able to sand on their feet'). Sentence structures are often repetitive or incorrectly joined. To improve, focus on mastering basic sentence structures, ensuring correct verb tenses, and practicing the use of relative clauses to combine ideas more accurately.

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