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Band 5+: Write a letter to a restaurant manager to organise a party Why you want to give the party What is special arrangements you will need. Anynrelevant question.

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Dear sir or madam,

My name is Ruhi and I frequent visit your restaurant zafran comma your restaurant it is a good reputation and I personally experienced about your service and food qualities. I am writing this letter to your book restaurant banquet hall for party on 31st December.

The occasion is organised for my daughter 5th birthday celebration and there will be around 100 case to invited for this party. So the food and sitting arrangements need to accordingly. However something in my mind for flowers and decoration table if you have and in house florist I can discuss and given them the details apart from there if possible I would like to get the decoration tekken care of buy a local florist I know.

In the food menu Indian and Chinese dishes need to be included which need to be both vegetarian and non vegetarian I would also need a corner reserved for DJ and the dance floor.

I will be free to discuss the menu details and the cost of the entire arrangement over the weekend. Kindly let me know a suitable time to visit your restaurant on the weekend, so that we can discuss these details.

Looking forward to your response.

You are faithfully,

Ruhi

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses the task by explaining the reason for the party, and the special arrangements needed. The content is relevant and sufficiently detailed. To improve, ensure that all sentences are grammatically correct and that the tone is consistently formal throughout the letter.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved. Consider dedicating a paragraph to each main point (reason for the party, special arrangements, and questions). Transitions between ideas could also be smoother. For example, use phrases like 'In addition to this' or 'Furthermore' to connect related ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement. Try to use more precise and varied language. For instance, instead of 'good reputation,' you could say 'excellent reputation' or 'well-regarded establishment.' Also, replace 'sitting arrangements need to accordingly' with 'seating arrangements need to be adjusted accordingly.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and correct article usage (a, an, the). For example, 'I frequent visit' should be 'I frequently visit.' Also, proofread carefully to catch these errors before submitting your work.

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