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Band 5+: Write a letter to college accommodation officer. You started to share your room with another Student and have some arrangements problems. 1.situation. 2.problem. 3.solution.

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Dear Mr Joy,

I write to express my disappointment towards the hostel accommodations.

I am a first-year student in the A-block-21. Last month only, I started to share my room with another student from my same batch due to the unavailability of rooms. As a first-year and newly to hostel life, it feels happy to share a room with my bachmate. However, it seems very hard to cope with the facilities in the room for two members over the past month.

The main problem is the lack of space for luggage, so it makes the room always congested. In addition, we have only one table and chair for study purposes, which makes some conflicts between us.

As a solution, I suggest it is better to set up a proper-sized cupboard and studytable with chair.

I await a response from you and hope this matter can be resolved very soon.

Your sincerely,

Mariya C. J.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The situation, problem, and solution are clearly presented. Minor improvements in clarity and detail would elevate the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally easy to follow. However, some improvements in sentence structure and flow would enhance the overall coherence and cohesion. The logical progression of ideas could be strengthened.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context. While the range is sufficient, incorporating more precise and sophisticated vocabulary would improve the overall lexical resource score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

There are several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency of the letter. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for achieving a higher score.

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