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Dear Natalie I’m sorry, I don’t have a good news for you, I had accident with the computer, yesterday I was working at home and my child David was played next to me a put down the coffee on the keywords and immediately I clean all keywords and I used the hairdryer to try to dry but the computer is no turn on any more. This morning I went to the services repair computers and the man said the board is damage. we can not to help with this problem, I will to but new computer for you. I would like to buy new computer in the black Friday at David Jones, I have staff discount i can to buy more economic also I have warranty just in in case we can to refund it.

Again, I’m sorry for the delay in telling you. i hope you can forgive me.

Best wishes

Carolina

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Overall Band Score

4.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
computer: 4
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Task Response

6.5
The letter effectively conveys the message of the damaged computer and the intention to replace it. It demonstrates a good understanding of the task.

Coherence & Cohesion

4
The letter lacks a clear structure and flow. The sentences are often grammatically incorrect, making it difficult to follow the message.

Lexical Resource

5
The letter uses a range of vocabulary, but there are some errors in word choice and collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
The letter contains numerous grammatical errors, affecting the overall clarity and fluency.

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