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Deat Maftuna,

I am very sorry about the camera that I borrowed from you had been spoiled because of me and that’s why I hadn’t returned it to you.

It is widely recognized that theri is a significant reason why the camera get damaged. I was taking photos

in the street and it was a little bit crowded and then someone pushed me from the back. I failed to hold the camera and it feel on the ground. Altought the camera still works, there are several cracks in the lens.

There is considerably profound apology from you as I made you inconveninet condition and not related to me. I would like to give my sincere apologies to you. Please accept my apology. If you tell me where you got your camera from, i will go there and buy a camera of the same brand.

i know that this camere is of great imortance to you. I’m so sorry for the damage and i hope you can forgive my carelessnness

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Task Response

6.5

The letter effectively conveys the message of apologizing for damaging the camera and offering to replace it. The intention is clear and the response is appropriate.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter has some issues with coherence and cohesion. The flow of ideas is not always smooth and there are some grammatical errors that make it difficult to follow the message.

Lexical Resource

The letter uses a good range of vocabulary, but there are some errors in word choice and collocations.

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The letter contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, articles, and prepositions. These errors affect the overall clarity and fluency of the letter.

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