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Band 4+: write a letter to friend you have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged

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Dear John,

I am writing to apply for damaged technique which I have borrowed computer from you.

I am sincerely sorry for in this situation. I am aware of the importance of this device but i did not careful. In this situation, i admitted to only i have fault.

I did not expect to damaged on your computer. All events were transport being suddenly. Unfortunately, i used from a device and then it turned off and do not turn in again.

If you would like to might fix it or i may give om computer’s money.

Please, accept my apologies once again.

Yours Sincerely,

Dilnura Qurbonova

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses the task but lacks clarity and precision in explaining the situation. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

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The message is understandable but lacks a logical flow and suffers from numerous grammatical errors, impacting coherence.

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The vocabulary is adequate but limited, and some word choices are inaccurate or inappropriate.

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