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Band 5+: Write a letter to the teacher. In the letter. Say how you came to know about him or her. Explain why you want to learn . Ask what help they can offer.

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I am writing to inquire about taking English lessons with you and I am delighted to have found out about your language teaching service through a local advertisement.

The reason I am been on learning English is my desire to expand my horizons and explore diverse culture I believe that this language high help for me and when I was the child l want go to English course but I haven’t enough time for this course

I am reaching out to request about the language learning opportunities you offer I would like to you will spend this lesson with various demonstrations and interesting games.

Thank you for considering my request. I look forward to your response.

Sincerely

Zaxro

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

about: 3

english: 3

language: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, the explanation of the reasons for wanting to learn English could be more clearly expressed and developed. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, some sentences lack clarity and smooth transitions, impacting the overall flow. Improving sentence structure and adding cohesive devices would enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is sufficient but lacks range and precision in places. More sophisticated vocabulary choices would improve the letter's overall impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect the clarity and accuracy of the letter. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for achieving a higher score.

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