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Band 5+: Write a letter to your colleagues to co-arrange the party. In your letter: Say what would you do differently than last year Say what you think were some of the things not so good last year Suggest where to meet to plan for the party.

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Dear colleagues,

I am writing to re-arrange the work party which we celebrates annually in July. I would like to inform about some major changes that have been made to make it more enjoyable and participating.

Previously, we went to an auditorium hall to make our get together party joyful but most of the people found it kind of boredom. To create some memorable life experience, we have planned to organise party at a riverside in mountains giving us opportunity for fishing as well. On special requests, barbecue and camping facilities can be enjoyed. Open music and dance will bring more colours to party.

All suggestions and meetings will take place in office’s board room upstairs. After a couple of meeting regarding plans, we will be all set to go.

Yours sincerely

Anish

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

6.5

The letter addresses the task well, covering all the required points. However, some ideas could be more fully developed, and the tone could be more formal and professional. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is easy to follow, and the writer uses cohesive devices effectively. However, some sentences are a bit short and simple, and more varied sentence structures would improve cohesion.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The writer uses some good vocabulary, such as 'memorable life experience' and 'bring more colours to party'. However, there are some errors in word choice, and more precise vocabulary could be used in some places.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The writer uses a range of sentence structures, but there are some errors in grammar and punctuation, such as missing articles and incorrect verb tenses. More attention to grammatical accuracy would improve the overall score.

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Band 5+: Write a letter to your colleagues to co-arrange the party. In your letter: Say what would you do differently than last year Say what you think were some of the things not so good last year Suggest where to meet to plan for the party.

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