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Band 5+: Write a letter to your direct manager. In your letter: • Ask for time off and explain why • Provide the dates and times for which you will be unavailable to work • Describe what you will do to prepare or make up for your absence

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Dear sir/mam

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to you to request time off so I can go with my family.

I request you to grant me this leave because since I have moved to Canada I haven’t seen my family, its been almost 2 years. And this year they have planned to come here and meet me. And this is a kind of opportunity that doesn’t come again and again.

The gathering is planned on 30th October that is Thursday . I am requesting off from work from October 28, until Wednesday. Hence, I will be still available till 27th October and I will rejoin the work from November 3rd November.

To make sure my work gets done, I will assign my work to my team in advance so the work doesn’t slow down the progress continues.

I will be looking forward for your reply

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5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Task Response

6.5

The letter successfully addresses all parts of the task. However, the explanation could be slightly more concise and professional.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly clear, but the flow could be improved with better transitions and sentence structure. Grammar errors impact the overall coherence.

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The vocabulary is adequate but lacks range and sophistication. More precise and varied word choices would enhance the letter.

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