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Band 5+: Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say what type of party should be held e.g. themed, fancy dress, black tie event • suggest a suitable venue • make recommendations as to entertainment e.g. DJ, jazz band You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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dear lia

i hope you are doing will. i wish you can resive this letter for instuanse, i have experian from celeberate this kind of party last year .i took the same event party and it was very good so form this kind of party colorful dress for girls and black tie for boys becouse it a landmark birtday this kind clothes give them good feel they are realy think become young and it make more self confidence for them. in my idea that is better to choose some non alcoholic drink and factfood dish such as,fish,pizza,cheeseburger and the important thing that make the party more injoyable is DJ.a good dj can make the party interesting near that choose any game also like the truth and lie it cause everyone share thire scret to each other and this moment become a membrebale condation to everyone .so i gladfull if my idea can help you .i am witing for you respons good luck .

regarted

nilab

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

party: 5

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task requirements by suggesting a party theme (colorful dress for girls and black tie for boys), recommending food and drinks, and suggesting a DJ and a game for entertainment. However, it lacks a specific venue suggestion. The language contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, which affect clarity. To improve, focus on providing specific details for each point (e.g., suggest a particular venue) and proofread carefully for grammatical accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat difficult to follow. Consider structuring your letter with clearer topic sentences for each paragraph to improve the flow and ensure each point is easily understood. Transition words could also be used to link ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and sometimes inaccurate ('resive,' 'instuanse,' 'membrebale condation'). To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary that is more precise and appropriate for the context. Focus on learning synonyms and collocations related to party planning and celebrations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors throughout the letter, including incorrect verb forms, sentence structure issues, and punctuation mistakes. Work on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofreading carefully can help catch many of these errors.

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