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Band 5+: write a letter to your friend that you left something important at her home

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Dear Sevinch.

I hope you are doing well.I wanted tell you that we spent our time wonderfully.This holidayn was the best moment to enjoy together.I really enjoyed every time of it,from spending time to exploring new places, and having greateful conversations.Your attention was amazing to me.I truly relaxed with you.

But unfortunately,I knew that i left something at your home.I realized it after arriving home.This thing was the USB cable.I suppose I must have forgotten it in the living room or on your own room.My phone did not charge,therefor I really need my USB cable,and i want to get it back as soon as possible.

If you have free time on Saturday,can you send it to me by extra taxi or by registered mail.IF you WANT TO SEND ME NOW,i WILL GIVE MONEY TO TAXI, OR i WILL SEND YOU MY ADRESS.

LASTLY, IF YOU ARE PLANNING TO VISIT OUR CITY, MAYBE YOU CAN BRING IT WITH YOU.LET ME KNOW WHAT DO YOU CHOOSE,WHAT KIND OF VARIANT IS CONVENIENT TO YOU

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter successfully addresses the task by conveying the message about the forgotten item. However, the structure could be improved for better clarity and impact.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's coherence is somewhat affected by the inclusion of unnecessary details and abrupt shifts in focus. Improving the flow and logical sequencing of ideas would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is adequate, but there's room for improvement in word choice and precision. More sophisticated vocabulary and precise language would enhance the overall impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Grammatical errors and inconsistencies detract from the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for achieving a higher score.

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