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Band 4+: Write a letter to your friend who is moving to your hometown and asking for information.write a letter and tell him about: - housing in town - school for his children - socialization with locals.

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Dear Maulik,

Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to give information about my city, to which you would like to migrate.

To start with, it is not possible for everyone to het home easily and in little rent, which is the only difficult factor in my city. You can search on the Internet also i will find for you near mu home. Our roads and construction are very neat and clean so, you will find better place to live.

Moreover, it is quite helpful for your kids to reach school . They can get their school by walk and by cycle. A very famous school is behind my house , which would be better for their education.

To sum up, if i talk about the people of around me, they are very kind and humble also always ready to help. They are very sociable, that’s whyyou can easily get in touch with them. This is one of the benefits of my hometown.

Hoping to see you soon

Your lovingly,

Dhananjay

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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school: 3

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Task Response

The letter partially addresses the task by providing some information about housing, school for children, and socialization with locals. However, the information is not detailed enough and lacks specific examples or details.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues with paragraphing and organization. Some ideas are not developed fully, leading to a lack of clarity in certain parts.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but there are inaccuracies and awkward phrasings throughout the letter. More precise and appropriate word choices would enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While there is an effort to use a variety of sentence structures, there are several grammatical errors present, such as subject-verb agreement issues, incorrect prepositions, and punctuation errors. Proofreading for grammar is recommended.

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