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Band 6+: Write a letter to your manager in your local community. Talk about that you are unable to continue doing this work -describe the work you have been doing - explain why you can no longer work - recommend another person

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Being a voluntier in your organisation for over three years, in the department of occupational health and safety where I conduct toolbox trainings to new workers joining the company as well as visitors visiting the organisation on duty baisis, I am writing to let you know I will not be able to continue rendering my services to your estemed organisation.

Furthermore, I will not be able to continue offering my services to your company because I have started a business of mu own in Abu Dhabi, which is 170 kilometers faraway from Dubai where your comanpy is based. As a result, I have fully moved to Abu Dhabi to focus on the the development and growth of my business.

Additionally, I will like to recommend a friend of mine called Adred to take over my services rendered to your company. Adred is very interested in joining the company as a volunteer where he can gain tangible experience to enhance his carrier growth.

I look forward to hearing from youat your earliest convenience.

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6.5

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