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Band 5+: Write a report describing the information in the graph below. Write at least 150 words.

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The image presents a bar graph quantifying "Computers per 1000 inhabitants" and "Internet per 1000 inhabitants" for the following countries: Egypt (Computers ~50, Internet ~50), Jordan (Computers ~50, Internet ~75), Kuwait (Computers ~130, Internet ~100), Lebanon (Computers ~100, Internet ~50), Morocco (Computers ~50, Internet ~50), Oman (Computers ~50, Internet ~75), Saudi Arabia (Computers ~75, Internet ~50), Syria (Computers ~50, Internet ~50), UAE (Computers ~110, Internet ~325).

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The graph gives the information about computers and Internet in the Arab World per thousand people. There is present nine courtiers Egypt, Jordan, Kuwait, Lebanon, Morocco, Oman, S. Arabia, Syria, UAE.

The bigger amount of internet users in UAE, it is 340 per 1000 inhabitants. However, the users of the computer are just above 150. The same picture in Kuwait, there is 130 computers. But only 100 people have internet. There are the equal number of computers and internet users in Jordan and in Oman. There are about 30 and 40 accordingly. Also, the same data in Egypt and in Morocco, approximately fifteen for two categories. The internet connection has only 5-7 per 1000 inhabitants in Syria. Surprisingly that computer bought 15 people.

Overall, the more digital county is UAE, there are computer and internet more than 150. The smallest number of users in Syria. Second place took Egypt, Morocco, then Jordan, Oman, S. Arabia, Lebanon, Kuwait.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

internet: 6

there: 5

users: 4

computers: 3

egypt: 3

jordan: 3

kuwait: 3

morocco: 3

syria: 3

computer: 3

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the task by describing the data for computers and internet usage across the listed countries. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., UAE internet users stated as 340 instead of 325, computer users as 'just above 150' instead of 110, and various other figures for other countries that do not match the visual description). The report also includes some irrelevant or unclear comparisons and omits key details for some countries. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the main trends and key features, such as the UAE's high internet usage and the general patterns of computer and internet penetration, while avoiding minor data errors and ensuring all countries are covered appropriately.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to describe the data but lacks a clear overall structure. The introduction is somewhat repetitive, and the body paragraphs mix comparisons without a logical flow. The conclusion is present but could be more concise and better linked to the main trends. To improve, consider organizing the report into clear paragraphs: one for an overview of the main trends, and another for specific comparisons. Use cohesive devices more effectively to guide the reader through the data.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and sometimes imprecise (e.g., 'bigger amount', 'digital county'). There is limited range and some repetition. To improve, use more varied and precise terms such as 'significantly higher', 'comparable figures', or 'notably lower'. Avoid informal phrasing like 'the same picture' and aim for more formal academic language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity (e.g., 'There is present nine courtiers', 'the more digital county is UAE'). Sentence structures are often incomplete or incorrectly formed. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct use of articles, and proper sentence construction. Practice using a variety of sentence structures, such as complex and compound sentences, to enhance accuracy and range.

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