Band 4+: Write a short email to your classmate. Tell them about the message from the museum manager and ask what changes, new exhibits, facilities, or events they think would make the museum better. Write about 50 words.

The letter appropriately addresses the task, conveying the museum manager's message and soliciting the classmate's opinion on improvements. The content is relevant and sufficient. To further enhance the response, consider providing a slightly more detailed suggestion or question to prompt a more specific response from the classmate. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

The letter is generally coherent, but the flow could be improved with better transitions between ideas. Consider using more cohesive devices to link your sentences and paragraphs more smoothly. For example, you could use phrases like 'In addition to this' or 'Furthermore' to connect your ideas.

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task. To enhance your lexical resource, try incorporating more specific and varied vocabulary related to museums and exhibits. For instance, instead of 'new types of exhibits,' you could suggest 'interactive displays' or 'themed exhibitions.'

There are some grammatical errors that affect the clarity of the message. Pay closer attention to verb tenses and subject-verb agreement. For example, 'The manager of the museum wants to adding' should be 'The manager of the museum wants to add'. Review your work carefully to identify and correct these errors.