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Band 5+: write a short email to your friend who is also in the msuical club like you.say what musical activity you want the club to try and whether you want to join it, (50 words)

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Hi Liza

I hope you are doing well. As we are members of music club and they are planning to introduce a new activity for their members. When they asked some suggestion about musical activity I recommended to hold some kind a competition related to music and as award to give presents. And in my opinion as they asked, they should pay attention more to simply enjoying music together as all of us coming to this event just for enjoy and have a rest. Surely, I want to take part in this event and how about you

Take care. Emma

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

music: 3

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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses the task by suggesting a musical activity (a music competition with prizes) and expressing a desire to participate. The suggestion to focus on enjoying music is also relevant. A minor improvement could be to more explicitly state your desire to join the activity. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is generally clear, but the flow of ideas could be smoother. Consider using more transitional phrases to connect your ideas and ensure each sentence logically follows the previous one. For example, you could add phrases like 'Furthermore' or 'In addition' to build upon your points more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, but there's room to enhance it with more specific and varied word choices. For instance, instead of 'some kind a competition,' you could suggest a 'themed musical contest' or a 'battle of the bands.' This would make your suggestions sound more engaging and precise.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay closer attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and article usage. For example, 'When they asked some suggestion' should be 'When they asked for suggestions.' Proofreading carefully will help catch these errors.

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