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Band 4+: Write email to your friend in another country. Tell about your role models

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Dear Jame!

It’s been a long time no see you Jame, how are you still good or bad. I hope you and your family well.

Anyway, the reason i’m writting this email to tell my role models. My role models is my teacher name Linda. She is a pretty girl, she is my teacher teach me on english. She always support me when i need. She always encourage me when i get bad score and remind me when i’m not concentrate.

With another she just a normal human, but with me she is kind help me when I

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A1 - Beginner
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No noticeable repetition! Great job!

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The letter successfully addresses the task by mentioning role models. However, it lacks detail and could be more engaging. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

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The letter has some issues with coherence and cohesion. The flow of ideas is not always clear, and there are some grammatical errors that affect the overall understanding.

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