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Band 5+: Write letter to your friend 1.Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday? 2.Describe some possible disadvantages 3.Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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I’m writing this letter to reponding your request.At first,i think a camping holiday is a good idea because both of us need to travelling after working for a long time.however,it probably has heavy cost.compare to another entertainment it can be a best because both of us enjoy of nature.

Although,it has some drawbacks because we have to go where that indeed far away from our house so we havn’t many facilities so we have to pick up many things and didn’t forget any thing.also,we need some stuff to protect of ourselfs because we may face many wild animals.

Nevertheles,I’m realy busy for this summer but I make numerous effort fininish my work and come with you.due to,I havn’t seen you for a long time and I like to see you again and review our memories.I believe it can be good for me as we have alot in common with you.

I look forward to see you for this summer.

Thanks for your patience and coopration.

Yours sincerely

Maryam

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The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task, providing reasons for recommending a camping holiday, outlining potential drawbacks, and stating the writer's willingness to join. However, the response could be more structured and detailed.

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