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Band 4+: Writing task 1 (a report) The chart below describes the sources of electricity produced in four countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents four pie charts representing the sources of electricity in India, Sweden, Morocco, and Vietnam between 2003 and 2008, divided into categories of Fossil fuel, Hydro power, and Nuclear power. India's chart shows Fossil fuel at 92%, Hydro power at 6%, and Nuclear power at 2%. Sweden's chart indicates Fossil fuel at 46%, Hydro power at 50%, and Nuclear power at 4%. Morocco's chart illustrates Fossil fuel at 91%, Hydro power at 9%, and no Nuclear power. Vietnam's chart reveals Fossil fuel at 25%, Hydro power at 75%, and no Nuclear power.

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The illustration compares the source of electricity around four regions between 2003 and 2008. Overall, There are three types of source given, and While India and Vietnam chiefly depend on Fossil fuels, in other two countries Sweden and Morocco, it was hydropower.

Highest percentage usage of fossil fuel as a source of electricity was observed in India with almost 82% little closely followed by Vietnam which has 56.3%. Additionally, India not only used fuel but also hydro power and Nuclear power which comprises only 14.6 and 3.5%, respectively, while Vietnam accounted for 43.7% of Hydropower.

In comparison, Morocco was dominant in using hydropower as their source for electricity with 95.5% while it has one of the least usage of fossil fuel that comprises 4.5% almost similar to Sweden’s percentage 4%. Sweden also used hydropower as a main source that comprises 52% with nuclear power which was 44%.

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source: 5

electricity: 3

while: 3

india: 3

vietnam: 3

fossil: 3

which: 3

power: 3

comprises: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task and identifies the main categories, but there are significant issues with data accuracy and logical consistency. The report provides figures that deviate substantially from the provided visual description (for example, stating Morocco uses 95.5% hydropower when the description suggests 9%, and stating Vietnam uses 56.3% fossil fuel when the description suggests 25%). Additionally, the overview contains a factual error by grouping Morocco with Sweden as hydropower-dependent, whereas the data indicates Morocco relies heavily on fossil fuels. To improve, ensure that the data reported matches the visual information provided and double-check that comparisons between countries are logically sound and supported by the figures mentioned. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of ideas is somewhat logical, but the progression is hindered by poor sentence structure and punctuation. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes used incorrectly (e.g., starting sentences with 'While' in a way that creates fragments). To improve, ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and use a variety of linking words (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Conversely', 'Regarding') to connect ideas smoothly. Avoid starting sentences with capital letters in the middle of a thought (e.g., 'Overall, There').

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is quite limited and often used inaccurately. There are several instances of awkward phrasing, such as 'little closely followed' and 'one of the least usage'. To reach a higher band, aim for more precise academic collocations (e.g., 'predominantly relied on', 'accounted for a significant proportion', 'represented a minority'). Work on using synonyms to avoid repeating 'source' and 'use' too frequently.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impact the readability of the report. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, sentence fragments, and incorrect preposition usage. For example, 'it was hydropower' is used incorrectly in the overview, and the sentence structure in the second paragraph is convoluted. Focus on mastering complex sentence structures and ensuring that every sentence has a clear subject and predicate. Pay close attention to punctuation to avoid run-on sentences.

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