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Band 4+: WRITING TASK 1 @cambridge_library You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You would like to reduce your working hours in order to study part time. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter explain why you want to reduce your working hours • say which hours you would like to work • describe how your part-time studies would benefit your employer Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear

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Dear Sir,

I am an employer of the accounting department, I am writing this letter to kindly request to reduce my working hours.

I have taken a decision to complete my part time master degree, which was stop in the middle due to some financial crisis. As a result, I will have to participate the classes, which will be on Friday, Saturday, and Sunday. There will be no matter regarding regular weekends holidays, but I want to reguest a leave in the every Friday untill December, 2025. If you give approval, I willing to work additional two hours in other working days.Moreover, This MBA is relating to accounting software, therefore, I will expect build my knowledge about the sage, and quickbook. It will be important to managed my job responsibilities more accurately, and development of my profesional life.

If you need any information please contact me.

Thank you for your consideration, and I look forward to approvel of this request.

Your faithfuly,

Chathu

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, the clarity and precision of the request could be improved.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's organization and flow are somewhat disrupted by grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Improving sentence structure and word choice would enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate but lacks range and sophistication. More precise and varied language would strengthen the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Numerous grammatical errors significantly impact the overall clarity and coherence of the letter. A thorough review of grammar rules is recommended.

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