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Band 6+: writing task 1 information about student accommodation in a city in US in 2013

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The image depicts student accommodation in 2013, showing undergraduates and postgraduates across various categories: University dormitory saw 45000 undergraduates and 500 postgraduates; With parents had 5000 undergraduates, 0 postgraduates; Shared apartment had 2000 undergraduates and 1800 postgraduates; Own apartment had 1000 undergraduates, 3000 postgraduates; Shared house had 3000 undergraduates, 2000 postgraduates; Own house had 500 undergraduates, 1000 postgraduates; Married student housing had 0 undergraduates, 500 postgraduates.
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The figure provides visual representation about living arrangements of students in the year 2013 at a United State’s university.

Overall it can be seen that most of the undergraduate’s opted for the most cost effective option with the University’s dormitory being the most popular option amongst many with about approximately 42,000 students choosing that as their residential plan.

Shared Apartments and Shared houses where also popular amongst the undergraduate students with about 3,800 students and 1,400 students living there respectively.

It can also be noticed that graduate students tend to stay sway from areas populated with students as a large number of them opted for Shared apartments,others go for their own apartments which provides them total privacy while some live in married student’s housing.

Cost and Privacy where the most dominant factor considered in this data when it comes to picking a residential plan for the graduates and undergraduates.

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Overall Band Score

6
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Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 - Complex
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
students: 7
about: 3
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Task Response

6
The report provides a general overview of the data but contains some inaccuracies and omissions. The overall trends are identified, but the report lacks specific details and precise data references. To improve, focus on providing more accurate data and avoid generalizations. Also, ensure all key features of the data are addressed. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

6
The report presents a general overview and some specific details, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider structuring the report with a clearer distinction between undergraduate and postgraduate accommodation preferences, perhaps dedicating separate paragraphs to each. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs could also be smoother to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

6
The vocabulary is generally adequate, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'popular,' try synonyms like 'favored,' 'preferred,' or 'sought-after.' Also, consider using more specific language to describe the trends and patterns observed in the data.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5
The report contains grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and proper article usage. Review and correct these errors to improve the overall grammatical accuracy of your writing. For example, 'undergraduate's' should be 'undergraduates'.

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