Band 5+: Writing task 1 You received a message from the cafe. We are grateful for your support. We want to know about your today visit. - How fast was the service? - Did they answer all your questions with the smile? - What was about new meal? Please give your feelings and recommendations? Task 1.1 - Informal Letter Write a short letter to your friend, who also visit often this cafe In your letter write your feelings and recommendations more than 50 words

The letter appropriately addresses the task by describing the visit to the cafe, including feelings about the service, staff, and new meal, and ends with a recommendation. The tone is informal and suitable for a friend. However, the response could be slightly more detailed, especially regarding the new meal and specific recommendations. To improve, consider elaborating on why the sushi was tasty and offering more concrete suggestions for the friend's visit. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

The letter is well-structured and easy to follow. The ideas flow logically from greeting to the visit details, feelings, and a recommendation. The paragraphing is appropriate, with each paragraph focusing on a different aspect (service, atmosphere, new meal). To achieve a perfect score, consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas more smoothly, such as 'In addition' or 'Moreover'.

The vocabulary is appropriate for an informal letter and includes some good phrases like 'radiant health' and 'best spirits'. However, there is room for more variety and sophistication. For example, instead of 'very fast', you could use 'remarkably quick' or 'efficient'. Also, 'pretty tasty' is a bit informal; consider 'quite delicious' or 'surprisingly good'. Overall, the language is clear and natural.

The letter demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences like 'I wanted to stay there all day'. However, there are a few minor errors: 'I like this cafe' should be 'I liked this cafe' for consistency with past tense, and 'Let's go together this weekend if you're free?' is a fragment - consider 'Let's go together this weekend if you're free.' Also, add a period after 'tasty'. Punctuation is mostly correct, but these small issues prevent a higher score.