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Band 7+: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

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The image displays two bar graphs comparing 1996 and 2006 data; the first graph shows percentage of film released with Drama at 30% (1996) and 25% (2006), Comedy at 40% (1996) and 35% (2006), Fantasy at 5% (1996) and 10% (2006), Romance at 10% (1996) and 30% (2006); the second graph shows percentage of cinema ticket sales with Drama at 20% (1996) and 23% (2006), Comedy at 15% (1996) and 20% (2006), Fantasy at 5% (1996) and 20% (2006), Romance at 10% (1996) and 7% (2006).

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The bar chart delineates the total proportion of films produced and the number of tickets sold in 1996 and 2006. Overall, while most of the categories gained a superficial increase from the previous figure, the others retained static growth.

Specifically, in 1996, drama category exhibited an extraordinary escalation from 25% to 35%, highlighting a vigorous growth throughout the years, while the comedy and fantasy genres experienced a slight increase approximately 5% in 2006. Conversely, the romance genre remained steady with no fluctuations.

Subsequently, the figure of ticket sales also encountered an upward trend from 16% to 17% in 2006, while the comedy and fantasy genres accounted for the same increase by around 5% in 2006, highlighting a significant growth in the film-making section. In contrast, the romance ticket selling witnessed a downward trend from 5% to 2%, becoming the lowest among the others.

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Task Response

The report identifies some trends but contains inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. The organization is present but could be improved for clarity. The language is somewhat imprecise and contains errors. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, organizing information more clearly, and using more precise language. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information, but the structure could be improved for clarity. The use of cohesive devices is present but not always effective in creating a smooth flow between ideas. Consider using more varied transition words and phrases to guide the reader through the comparison of data. Paragraphing is present, but the content within each paragraph could be more focused on a single aspect of the data.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary, but some word choices are not entirely appropriate or accurate for the context. For example, 'delineates,' 'superficial increase,' 'static growth,' and 'extraordinary escalation' are not used correctly. Focus on using vocabulary that precisely reflects the data and avoids exaggeration. Expanding your vocabulary related to describing trends and comparisons would also be beneficial.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'drama category exhibited an extraordinary escalation from 25% to 35%' contains inaccurate data and awkward phrasing. 'The figure of ticket sales also encountered an upward trend from 16% to 17% in 2006' is also awkwardly phrased and contains inaccurate data. Pay closer attention to subject-verb agreement, accurate data representation, and sentence structure. Reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing sentence construction would help improve accuracy.

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