Pie Chart

Band 4+: Writing Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000. The total budget was AED 315 billion. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image features a pie chart titled "Where the money goes," detailing various expenditure categories: Social security AED 100 billion, Health and personal social services AED 53 billion, Education AED 38 billion, Defence AED 22 billion, Law and order AED 17 billion, Housing the Heritage and Environment AED 15 billion, Industry, Agriculture & Employment AED 13 billion, Transport AED 9 billion, Other expenditure AED 23 billion, and Debt interest AED 23 billion.

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The pie chart illustrate situatiation related with money in UAE goverment in 2000. The full budget involv AED 315 billion Overall the biggest particle is a social security over 100 billion simulatiously the smalest is a transport. Other pieces a very roportionately.

Moreover, a health and personal social services which were a little bit more then half of the biggest part of pie. Education is the next it is 38 billion. The chart gives information only about three trenendous position.

The other pies flactuated between 13 to 23 billion. An Industry and agiculture, a housing the heritage and enviroment, a law and order heve a diference only in 4 billion. However how debt interests and other expenditure are similar the budget AED 23 billion. There were defence which have diference only in one billion.

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Task Response

The report identifies some key features of the pie chart but lacks depth in analysis and comparison. The organization is somewhat unclear, and the language contains errors that affect clarity. To improve, focus on providing a more comprehensive overview, using more precise language, and structuring the information logically with clear transitions. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report struggles with coherence and cohesion. The organization of information is not always logical, and the connections between sentences and paragraphs are weak. The report lacks clear topic sentences and transitions to guide the reader. Paragraphing is also not effectively managed, leading to a disjointed presentation of the data. To improve, focus on creating a clear structure with well-defined paragraphs, using transition words to link ideas, and ensuring that each sentence contributes to the overall message.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and sometimes inaccurate. There are instances of imprecise word choice (e.g., 'particle' instead of 'portion,' 'trenendous' instead of 'significant,' 'flactuated' instead of 'ranged'). To enhance lexical resource, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to financial data and government spending. Focus on using synonyms and more precise language to describe the information presented in the pie chart.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and improper use of articles (e.g., 'illustrate situatiation,' 'involv,' 'the smalest,' 'a health,' 'a housing,' 'heve a diference'). Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. To improve grammatical accuracy, carefully review basic grammar rules and practice constructing grammatically correct sentences. Pay attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence structure.

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