Pie Chart

Band 5+: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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Image for topic: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image shows three pie charts with numerical data points: San Diego: Residential 60%, Industry 23%, Agriculture 17%; California: Residential 39%, Industry 33%, Agriculture 28%; Worldwide: Residential 8%, Industry 23%, Agriculture 69%.

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The pie charts provide information about the percentages of water usage in San Diego, California and in other countries.

Overall, the percentages of San Diego and California nearly similar, while worldwide water using significantly different.

In San Diego 17% of water usage was for agriculture, while in California it consisted above one quarter (28%). For industry water usage they had a difference of 10 percent, San Diego 23%, California was approxiamtely one third, exactly 33%. In addition, there was a huge difference in residental using, if San Diego consisted 60%, in California it was 21 percent lower, 39%.

At that time, in worldwide water usage for agriculture included 69%, what was predictive. Residence using consisted only 8%, while Industry was 23%.

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Task Response

The report covers the main features of the pie charts and makes relevant comparisons. There are some minor inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., the difference in residential usage between San Diego and California). To improve, ensure greater accuracy in reporting the data and consider a more structured approach to the comparison, perhaps grouping similar sectors together. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize information, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Paragraphing is present but could be improved to better group related ideas. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas within and between paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, with some inaccuracies ('residental' instead of 'residential,' 'using' instead of 'usage'). There is an attempt to use some descriptive language ('huge difference,' 'predictive'), but this could be more precise and varied. Focus on expanding your vocabulary related to data description and comparison.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect word forms. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. For example, 'Overall, the percentages of San Diego and California nearly similar, while worldwide water using significantly different' contains multiple errors. Work on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules and sentence construction.

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