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Band 6+: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The first table below shows changes in the total population of New York City from 1800 to 2000. The second and third tables show changes in the population of the five districts of the city (Manhattan, Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens, Staten Island) over the same period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

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The image presents numerical data for New York City's population across its five districts, detailing figures for three specific years: 1800, 1900, and 2000. In the year 1800, the total city population was 79,216; Manhattan accounted for 60,515 (76%), while the other districts collectively had 18,701 (24%). By 1900, the city's population grew to 3,437,202, with Manhattan holding 1,850,093 (54%) and other districts 1,587,109 (46%). In 2000, the population further increased to 8,009,185; Manhattan comprised 1,538,096 (19%), whereas the other districts amassed 6,471,089 (81%).

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The provided tables illustrate three distinct pieces of data. The first table depicts changes in the overall population of New York City in the years between 1800 and 2000. The remaining tables represent alterations in the population of the five districts of the city [ Manhattan, Brooklyn, Queens, and Staten Island] over the same period.

Overall, the population of the New York City rose significantly, as well as the five districts show similar trends over the given period. Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens and Staten Island made up to majority of the city’s population, the percentage of Manhattan had decreased dramatically.

As regards Manhattan, the number of population made up most of the population of New York City which is 76%[60515]. However, the percentage slowly dropped to 19% even though the population reached 1.5 million.

Furthermore, the population of the other districts increased from 18701[24%] to 6.4 million[81%] which is much higher than Manhattan.

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population: 8

manhattan: 4

districts: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and makes relevant comparisons, such as the decline in Manhattan's share and the rise of other districts. However, there are some omissions (e.g., Bronx, Queens, Staten Island are not individually discussed) and minor inaccuracies (e.g., the list of districts is incomplete). The overview is clear, but more specific data points could be included. To improve, ensure all districts are mentioned and provide more precise figures for key changes.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and overview, but the paragraphing could be improved. The second paragraph attempts to summarise main trends, but the connection between sentences is sometimes unclear. Use more cohesive devices to link ideas smoothly, and ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited. There is some repetition (e.g., 'population' used frequently) and a few awkward phrases (e.g., 'made up to majority'). To improve, use a wider range of synonyms and more precise terms (e.g., 'constituted', 'accounted for', 'comprised'). Avoid informal expressions like 'much higher' in academic writing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains some grammatical errors and awkward structures (e.g., 'the number of population made up most of the population' is redundant; 'the percentage of Manhattan had decreased dramatically' could be more concise). There are also punctuation issues (e.g., missing commas). To improve, vary sentence structures and proofread for subject-verb agreement and article usage.

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