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Band 5+: You accidentally damaged a book borrowed from the library. Write a letter to the librarian. - Apologize for the damage and explain how it happened. - Mention the details of the book (title, author, etc.). - Offer to pay for the damages or replace the book.

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I am writing this letter to apologize about some damage on the book that I borrowed one book from your library for a few days and it is called “atomic hebit”when I borrowed the book ,it was nearly perfet condition, however while I was reading the it yesterday,I accidentally wear some sheets ,due to the fact that this book has become unreadable, owing to the fact that I don’t read it , until now I read about famous people who live as eternally which works as lawyer, but because of this I don’t read that’s why I returned the book and I borrowed that book on the first of march and I returned three of march ,if you want I gave money for fix the damage or I give new book instead of which damaged book,it is important for me ,I am very sorry for these problems.

I look forward to hearing from you soon

Your sincerely

Suxrob

Can you mark me 1 to 9

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, but the explanation of the damage and the overall structure could be improved for clarity and conciseness.

Coherence & Cohesion

The message is understandable, but the numerous grammatical errors and unclear phrasing disrupt the flow and make it difficult to follow at times. Improved sentence structure and paragraphing would significantly enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks range and precision. More sophisticated word choices would improve the overall quality of the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly impact clarity and accuracy. A focus on improving grammatical accuracy is essential.

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Band 5+: You accidentally damaged a book borrowed from the library. Write a letter to the librarian. - Apologize for the damage and explain how it happened. - Mention the details of the book (title, author, etc.). - Offer to pay for the damages or replace the book.

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