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Band 4+: You and your family have just rented an apartment and one or two problems occurred. Write a letter to the landlord. Describe the problems and tell him what you want him to do.

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Dear sir

I am writing this letter to complaint you about an apartment which I rented recently .

My name is shaxlo and arrived here in Moscow with my family a week ago before we lived in my uncle’s house than we suddenly saw your advertised on careeron.co. and we decided to rent your apartment. Yesterday we move it and surprised because this apartment did not look like the one we saw in the photo. In the photo which we saw was with furnished and heated. However when we entered home everything was empty. I think your workers mixed up my flat. The ideal solution would be bring furniture and heating or give me other flat which did not empty. I hope this matter would be resolved as soon as possible because the apartment was very cold.I look forward to receiving a prompt reply.

Yours faithfuly

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

apartment: 4

which: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter addresses the task but lacks detail and clarity in describing the problems. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's message is understandable, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and organizational issues. Improved paragraphing and sentence structure would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks range and precision. More sophisticated word choices would improve the overall impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Numerous grammatical errors significantly affect the clarity and fluency of the letter. Improved accuracy is crucial.

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