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Band 5+: You and your family have just rented an apartment and one or two problems occurred. Write a letter to the landlord. Describe the problems and tell him what you want him to do.

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Dear james,

Subject – complaint to landlord about problems in rantal house.

I hope you are fine.well , i am writing in to described my disappointment for your house.I am karan , who live in your home with my family from few days ago, in addition my apartment number 138.

Well, i would like to tell you about problems of your house , which is the bathroom taps are leaking , and in this situation my two years old daughter has slipped twice a time.

In addition,the main door is not proper aligned .It is hard to push and lock it. You are landlord and you have tie-up with plumber and carpenter. So please tell them to repair this problem or give me a contact number of them. Your contract for one year has included all maintenance , therefore i paid higher rent.As soon as possible to repair it.

Yours sincerely,

Karan.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by describing the problems and stating the desired actions. However, a more detailed explanation of the issues and their impact would improve the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow could be improved with better paragraphing and sentence structure. The numerous grammatical errors affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, but a wider range of vocabulary and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's impact. Some word choices are slightly inaccurate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the clarity and fluency of the writing. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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