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Band 4+: You and your friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were extremely dissatisfied with the experience. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: Explain the reason for the celebration. Give details of your visit to the restaurant. Say what you would like the restaurant to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction that I had experienced on a party at your restaurant.

I have booked a table for December 02 to give a party to my friends on my birthday. My booking and confirmation were done through your website, and I mentioned all my priorities that I want to get on that event.

When we reached to celebrate my birthday, that table which I booked were already filled with another family. I were really disturbed, however your team arranged an another seat for us. But they didn’t aware about our online booking, so we have to order again but we didn’t met with the taste and quality in any dishes.

Because of your team my day completely spoiled. I would request you to give back me the amount that I paid through your website and a compensation also towards the negligence of your team.

You can contact me for further process, I enclosed my details with this letter.

Yours faithfully,

Mariya C. J.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task, providing context, details, and a clear request. However, the explanation could be more detailed and engaging.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, grammatical errors and awkward phrasing affect the flow and clarity in several places. Improved sentence structure and clearer transitions would significantly enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, but lacks range and precision in places. More sophisticated word choices would improve the overall impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Numerous grammatical errors significantly impact the overall clarity and coherence of the letter. A thorough review of grammar rules and sentence structure is needed to improve accuracy.

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