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Band 8+: You are a history teacher at a high school. You saw an ad in a local newspaper about the local museum which coincides with what you are teaching in your school now. Write to the museum administrator. In your letter - Introduce yourself - Inform him/her that you want to bring your students to visit it. - Ask suitable timings and any other requirements to visit the museum

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Dear Sir,

I am Mohammad Hashim, a history teacher at Jindal Public School. Currently, I am educating my students on the history of the Mughals in India. Upon seeing your advertisement featuring artifacts from the Mughal period, I was excited.

I believe that showcasing these artifacts to my students would greatly aid in their comprehension of the Mughal lifestyle and culture. Hence, I am planning a school visit to your museum.

Could you please provide information regarding the suitable timings and costs for a group of 50-60 students to visit the museum on 25 September 2021? Additionally, kindly advise on any necessary preparations that need to be taken care of. I eagerly await your response.

Thank you for your attention.

Yours faithfully,

Mohammad Hashim

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