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Band 5+: You are arranging a visit to your elderly parents who live in another town. Write a letter to them outlining your travel plans and making sure they are prepared for your arrival. You should include: - Your arrival and departure dates. - Any assistance you might need during your stay. - Any specific requests or needs you have for them.

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hello Mom and Dad. Its me, your youngest daughter, Nadya.

I hope both of you are doing well right there. I’m planning to visit both of you next month to be specific, on 4th of september 2025. I decided to go back to Bogor during the long holiday from 4th of september 2025 until 8th of september 2025. My co-assistancy programs will be postponed due to the long holiday during that dates. So I decided to go back to home, not only because of the holiday, but also the feeling of longing what home feels like with both of you guys. I do miss the fresh air in Bogor too. Anyway,i will be arrived at Bogor Station at 7.00 am, 4th of september 2025. By the time of my arrival, i really hope one of you guys can pick me up since I will bring so many luggage.

I also plan to have a great holiday which is totally different from the last time I visit Bogor. I want to try some experiences that we have never tried before. I already booked 3 tickets for us to visit the night safari zoo on the next day after my arrival dates. I hope you guys can make time for that. Don’t forget to prepare your thick sweater or maybe a hoodie, because the location of the zoo near the mountain. I assume the air will be so cold. I think we also need to re-check our car before going to the zoo. I don’t want to experience any bad things on the road. I will send you the physical tickets of the zoo for you to keep it.

I will see you guys at 4th September. I really can’t wait for next week. I miss you both

with Love,

Your daughter

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Overall Band Score

5.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
september: 5
bogor: 4
holiday: 4
visit: 3
Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

7
The letter adequately covers the task requirements, including arrival/departure dates, a request for assistance, and specific needs/requests. There is a generally clear and coherent structure. To improve, focus on conciseness and avoid unnecessary repetition. For example, the exact dates are mentioned multiple times. Also, ensure a consistently formal tone, as some phrases are slightly informal for a letter to parents.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The letter is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved. Consider grouping related ideas into distinct paragraphs. For example, the details about the night safari could be in their own paragraph. Also, transitions between ideas could be smoother. For example, the shift from arrival details to holiday plans feels a bit abrupt.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement. Using more varied and precise language could enhance the letter. For example, instead of 'so many luggage,' you could say 'a considerable amount of luggage' or 'several bags.' Also, avoid overly casual language like 'you guys' in a letter to your parents; more formal alternatives would be better. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5
The letter contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and proper punctuation. For example, 'I will be arrived' should be 'I will arrive.' Also, be mindful of sentence structure to avoid run-on sentences. Proofreading carefully before submitting can help catch these errors.

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