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Band 5+: You are attending a course at an evening school. Write a letter to the director of the school with a complaint about the course. In your letter, you should: Describe the course you are taking. Explain what you don't like about the course. Give your opinion about what should be done about it

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Dear Sir,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about the course which i am attenting in your school and its quiet lengthy or it may require some changes in its content.

About an year ago, i have taken admission in the course title ” Money Banking & Finance” in the morning shift in class I-E. I would like to raise my voice for the topics of the course are not relatable to the practicle world. Secondly, we are not even able to learn the difficult language used in the whole course which may consequently lose the readers interest.

I would recommend to revisit the course it will not help the students to gain interest while attending class but also they will be fully aware of the fact about best industry practices.

Thank you for your attention to this critical matter.

Yours faithfully,

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

The letter addresses the task but lacks detail and clarity in some areas. More specific examples would improve the response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

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