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Band 4+: You are going to spend your vacation in Rome, Italy. Your friend's grandfather lives there and has offered to let you stay in his apartment. Write a letter to your friend's grandfather. In your letter: • Thank him for the offer but politely decline • Inform him of when you will be in Rome and your travel plans • Invite him for an outing

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Dear Mr. John,

I am writing this letter to inform you about Offering, I appreciate you for offering me.

To begin with, I am very delighted to you for offer me stay with you in your apartment, thank you for this but unfortunatly I cannot stay in you apartment because my friend salehin he has mange a apartment stay with him. that is why.

In addion, I planet about my travel I will go rome Italy, and my friend salehin will receive from airport, so hopefully I will meet you one day.

However, I know about you. you are kind person, I know about your self from your grandson, if I meet with you then I grateful to you. I want to meet you in any restaurent if you have time. i will meet you 30 september 2024 in evening time so I hope will meet me,

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours Sincerely,

onik hosan

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses the task, but the structure and clarity could be improved.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter lacks a clear and logical flow. The message is difficult to follow due to grammatical errors and unclear sentence structure.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate, but there are some errors in word choice and usage.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly affect the clarity and coherence of the message.

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