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Band 5+: You are having a graduation party next Saturday night. You have invited 50 people to celebrate at an outdoor barbecue evening, which may continue till late night. Write a letter to your elderly neighbour. In your letter

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Dear Mr. John

I am freshly graduate student living in your neighbourhood. I am writing this letter to make an apology for the situation which is going to happens next week , that can cause some inconvenience to you .

Actually I am recently graduated from a law school with flying colors. I put all my hard work to get the degree . My friend and family insist me celebrate my happiness. For this, I am going to host h party on next saturday , which will continue till midnight . There will some music , dance and outside barbecue in the party . I will keep in mind that the sound system would not be large. But you face any difficulties I sincerely want to apologies.

Apart from this, my parents are coming this sunday . I would like to invite you for the dinner on the same day .

I hope you accept my invitation.

Looking forward for your response.

Thanking you

Mena

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter addresses the task well, but could be improved by providing more specific details about the party and how the neighbor's potential inconvenience will be minimized.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly clear, but the flow could be smoother with better paragraphing and sentence structure. Numerous grammatical errors impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks range and sophistication. More precise and varied word choices would enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Grammatical errors are frequent and detract from the overall clarity and accuracy of the letter. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial.

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