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Band 5+: You are interested in attending a course. Write a letter to the course administrator. In your letter: -Provide details about the course you are interested in. -Explain why you want to attend this course. -Ask for more information about the course (e.g., schedule, fees, requirements).

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Dear sir or madam,

I am writing this letter to express my interest in joining your course.

I feel driven to inform you about my own essai and expertise and experience in English, which I have certified with board 8 in IELTS with an amazing score 75 in writing.

Regarding with my questions about course, first and foremost, I would like to know how much the tuition fee is. Futhermore, the schedule of the course should be appropriate for my availability.

Eventually I would like to ask some exclusive offers around me. I would be grateful if you allow me for a discounted price.

Well, as place me in a group where students are at least upper-intermediate. This, I hope, could assist me a lot in improving my current level to anigher one.

I look forward to my latter as soon as possible.

Yours sincerely,

Eddie Brock

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

would: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by expressing interest, explaining motivation, and requesting information. However, it could be improved by more clearly specifying the course and organizing information more logically. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization and flow could be significantly improved. Some sentences lack clear connections, impacting the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks range and precision in places. More sophisticated vocabulary choices would enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

Grammatical errors and inaccuracies detract from the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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