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Band 6+: You are interested in joining a professional organization in your field. Write a letter to the organization inquiring about the membership process and any benefits for members. In the letter: Introduce yourself and your professional background Explain your interest in joining the organization Request information on the membership process and the benefits of joining

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to inquire about the overall membership process and benefits for enrolling in as a member in your organization.

I am a data analyst by profession and have been working in TD Bank for last 5 years in Canada. Having done master’s degree from the University of Waterloo, I always wanted to join the DA organizations founded by alumni of my University.

It would be tremendous pleasure for me to join this firm as I would get to network with most of the well-known professionals from my field. I would surely get exposure to the emerging technologies and stay up-to-date with daily trends in this industry. This will also help me in getting an idea about the real world challenges that analysts ususally face in corporate world, and how to overcome the same.

Therefore, I kindly request you to let me know about the process of joining the organization as a member, especially about the modes of payment. I would really appreciate if you could also let me know about the benefits and incentives that I will receive upon enrolling.

Yours Faithfully,

Ishita

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Overall Band Score

6.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

about: 5

would: 4

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Task Response

7

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The introduction is clear, the interest in joining is well-explained, and the request for information is explicit. Minor improvements in clarity and conciseness would elevate the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

6

The letter's message is mostly easy to follow. However, some minor organizational issues and grammatical errors slightly impede the flow. Improved sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, although some word choices could be more precise and sophisticated. More varied and precise vocabulary would improve the overall lexical resource score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

While the letter uses a range of grammatical structures, several errors affect the overall accuracy and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy will significantly enhance the score.

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