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Band 6+: You are interested in joining a professional organization in your field. Write a letter to the organization inquiring about the membership process and any benefits for members. In the letter: Introduce yourself and your professional background Explain your interest in joining the organization Request information on the membership process and the benefits of joining

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Hi, Dear/Madam,

I’m writing this to express my interest in collaborating with your institute to figure out new job opportunities in information and technology. Therefore, I’d like to request you to provide further details about the members and facilities included.

To begin with, I Om Prakash, working as a senior software engineer in one of the reputed companies in Toronto. While working with my current client, businesses in energy utilities, I thought, I was lagging in field knowledge.

For this reason, I’d like to be part of your organization to meet different kinds of professional people with an immense understanding of power consumption.

If you don’t mind, please help me with further details on membership details and the different facilities your organization provides. Additionally, I would be delighted if location details were included in the response. Moreover, do we have a monthly subscription facility?

I am eagerly waiting for the response to accept my request.

Regards,

Om

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Overall Band Score

6

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 - Complex
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

6.5

The letter addresses the task by introducing the writer, explaining their interest in joining the organization, and requesting information on the membership process and benefits. However, the writer could provide more specific details about their professional background and reasons for wanting to join the organization.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues with paragraphing and the flow of ideas. Consider organizing the information more clearly into distinct paragraphs for better coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

There is a range of vocabulary used, but some words are not used accurately or appropriately. Work on improving the precision and sophistication of the language used. Additionally, watch out for grammatical errors in word choice.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

There are several grammatical errors throughout the letter, including punctuation and sentence structure. Review the use of articles, verb tenses, and sentence construction for better accuracy.

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