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Band 4+: You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain what sort of job you would like. • Say what experience and skills you have. Begin your letter as follows: "Dear sir/madam," You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing this letter in computer to inform you about me seaking for a permanent full -time job. My name is Niranjan Kumar, a human resource professional currently working with meta as a Payroll Manager.

Through your Job agence, i’m looking for the role of Human Resource Manager in an well established IT consuling firm, which will help in polishing my skills & boost my carier. I’m a having more then 10 years of experience in all aspect of Human Resource Management on top of it, I’m certified by the HRIS. Looking forward for your response with some good opportunities.

Yours Faithfully

Niranjan Kumar

Word Count: 107

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

human: 3

resource: 3

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Task Response

The letter effectively addresses the task, providing a clear introduction, job description, and relevant experience. However, it could be more detailed in outlining specific skills and qualifications. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

3.5

The letter lacks a clear structure and flow. Some sentences are grammatically incorrect, making it difficult to follow the message.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or in an awkward manner.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect punctuation and sentence structure. This affects the overall clarity and professionalism of the letter.

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Band 4+: You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain what sort of job you would like. • Say what experience and skills you have. Begin your letter as follows: "Dear sir/madam," You should write at least 150 words.

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