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Band 5+: You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain what sort of job you would like. • Say what experience and skills you have. Begin your letter as follows: "Dear sir/madam," You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear sir or madam,

I am writing this letter to ask about a part-time job in graphic design.

My name is Ishita, and I am a first-year student in the BSc nursing program. Recently, I moved to this city for my further studies because in this area, there are many opportunities for jobs and education.

Let me explain my views in detail. Last year, I completed my course in the graphic design in Chandigarh and I also do lots of projects for different websites. Before my first -year of the BScnursing program. I worked in the multinational Company as a post of manager in graphic design. I also experience with different people and I learned different techniques in graphic design which is very beneficial for company development.

I would like to request if you like my references, please inform me because it was very helpful for me and save my time for another part-time job.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours Faithfully ,

Ishita Sharma

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

graphic: 4

design: 3

different: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by introducing the candidate, specifying the desired job, and highlighting relevant experience and skills. However, the structure and clarity could be improved for better impact.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's organization and flow could be significantly improved. Paragraphing and transitions between ideas need refinement for better clarity and readability. The grammar errors affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate but lacks range and sophistication. More precise and varied language would enhance the letter's impact. Some word choices are slightly inaccurate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score. A wider range of grammatical structures would also be beneficial.

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