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Band 5+: You are looking for a part time job at football club. Write a letter to manager. 1.introduction your self 2.explain what experience you have 3.colud join?.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to apply for a position at your football club.

I am a 24 years,old- boy, who dreamed sports coaching as a career goal.I show dedication and higher responsibility towards my work. Whereas Iam pursuing my family ambition that, to became an Engineer. However, Iam a passionated football boy, and wish to perform my skill, as a part-time guider in your settings.

I have many relevant skills to offer. These includes that, a sports trainer certificate,and an experience of two-year as a coach at Womens college. Iam sure that, I am able to handle all the age -group categories.

I am especially interest in being an active leader at the club. If you allow me, I would be glad to schedule my role at the evening, after my campus. It will be very convenient for me to join the very next week.

I thank you for your consideration and look forwards to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Mariya C. J.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. Minor improvements in clarity and structure would enhance the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly clear, but some sentences lack conciseness and smooth transitions. Improving sentence structure and flow would significantly improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but a wider range and more precise word choices would demonstrate a higher level of fluency and sophistication.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

While the letter conveys the message, numerous grammatical errors and inconsistencies detract from the overall clarity and impact. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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